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本主题由 supercc 于 2007-11-9 09:16 设置高亮

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我最近也想通了
这就是天将降大任了
前一阵子总是意外伤害事故,比如摔交、生病、见血之类,物理上的伤害还勉强能对付,没放在心上;
于是就给上精神层次的打击了。
目前应该算比较全面的挺过来了,I AM BACK[f12]
We are all just prisoners here
Of our own device

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绝对牛人!
        原来我是如此脆弱。
        不行,我要加油。

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(三十一 11-28)
实在不想看书,于是上网。看老外写作文指南。
看看这,简直和咱们的应试教育模板没得比亚。要用这么点心思写考研作文,facultyman一准判你个8分。
考研作文,宜complex perplex exquisite and euphuistical。

How To Write A Whole Composition
The following is a general structure to follow for many kinds of writing.  Adapt it to specialized assignments as appropriate.

I.  Introduction

The introduction is intended to draw the reader into the body of material to follow.  It should begin with a general statement or question, sometimes called the "thesis statement" or "thesis question," followed by a quick narrowing down to the main theme to be developed in the body.  Set the stage quickly, give appropriate background, then move right into a transition sentence that will set up the reader for the body.

II. Body (Argument)
The body of a written piece is where you elaborate, defend, and expand the thesis introduced in the introduction.  The body should support your main contention with supporting evidence and possible objections.  A good body presents both sides of a case, pro and con.  As you make your case, save your best argument for last.  When presenting contrary views, be sure to set forth the strongest arguments so you can avoid being charged with erecting a "straw man."  The body includes three components:

Elaboration:        
Spell out the details by defining, or by clarifying and adding relevant, pertinent information.

Illustration:        
Paint a verbal picture that helps make or clarify your point(s).  Well illustrated pieces are easier to read and follow than abstract ones.

Argumentation:        
Give the reasons, justifications, and rationales for the position or view you have taken in the introduction.  Draw inferences for the reader and explain the significance or assertions or claims being made.

When moving from one sub-point or argument to another, use connecting or transitional words and phrases that enable your reader to easily follow the flow of your thinking. The following is a partial list of logical connectors that you can use:

exceptions - but, alas, however, etc.
illustrations - for instance, for example, etc.
conclusions - thus, so, therefore, consequently, etc.
comparisons - similarly, by contrast, etc.
qualifications - yet, still, etc.
additions - moreover, furthermore, etc.

III.  Conclusion
Make your final appeal to the reader, a finishing, all-encompassing statement that wraps up your presentation in a powerful or even dramatic fashion.  Normally a single paragraph, brief and concise, will suffice.  The purpose of the conclusion is to leave the reader with an idea or thought that captures the essence of the body while provoking further reflection and consideration.

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★在这个网站(http://www.eslbee.com/),随手做了一个小小的题,得出一如下结果:
Neither the apples nor the basket _____ expensive.
A-is (1104 votes) 55.67%
B-are (879 votes) 44.33%
(Total Votes: 1983 )

Neither the apples nor the basket is expensive. Rule: When subjects are joined by or, either...or, neither...nor, the verb must agree with the nearer subject.  Please read on...

由此可以得出,这世界上还有好多笨蛋,我大可安心的活下去。


★怎么写作文~
引用:
The Straight Line of Development stated simply is this:  "Tell your readers what you are going to tell them; then tell them; then tell them what you told them."

Advice from a great writer using parallel structure:
Put it before them briefly so they will read it, clearly so they will appreciate it, picturesquely so they will remember it and, above all, accurately so they will be guided by its light.
     —Joseph Pulitzer (1847-1911) was editor and publisher of the New York World and one of the great men of journalism of the 19th century.
★一个很辉煌的长句:107个单词。About 小布什同学。
引用:
Tonight will be a stomach-churning moment for Mr. Bush, and he must be puzzling over how he got snarled in this nightmare, with Old Europe making him beg, North Korea making him wince, the deficit making him cringe, the lost manufacturing jobs making him gulp; with the hawks caving in to the U.N. and to old Saddam Baath army members who want to rebuild a security force; with Representative David Obey demanding the unilateral heads of Rummy and Wolfie, so that "Uncle Sam doesn't become Uncle Sucker"; with the F.B.I. warning that more Islamic terrorists who know how to fly planes may be burrowing into our neighborhoods.
[ 本帖最后由 阿濯 于 2007-11-28 10:51 编辑 ]
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呵呵,不想看书的时候你还看全英文的东东。昨天看到你的帖就是没敢回因为我看不进去,今天下定决心,看完了。还好,其实人大多时候是被自己吓倒了吧。

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偶发现如果按照TOEFL,IELTS的作文来训练其实不错的,看了一个考过IELTS的同学写的几篇和自己的就是有很大差距
不爽的时候就阿甘,更不爽的时候就教父

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(三十二 11-29)
下午的时候,收到一条短信,一看吓了一跳:你要做娘了!
我立刻想起了薄幸浪荡子听到痴情MM羞答答的说你要做爹了……
定睛一看,原来是TAKU,丫有喜了。呼呼,从前说过,她的小孩叫她做妈,叫我为娘的。
人家不怀孕的时候天天跟我抱怨我是不是barren啊我老公是不是barren啊,现在好了,怀上了然后开始念叨烦死啦不能上网不能动弹啥也不想吃啥也不能吃。
只能较劲脑汁的开导小孕妇,抑郁对于胎儿来说并不是好事情。
可是她似乎都没有要为人母的认知,一个劲的在埋怨肚子是个负担。
我说有个孩子多好亚。我说——
然后我突然发现我真的想不起来孩子有什么好,虽然我那么喜欢小孩子。
现在的儿子女儿,都让人操碎了心,而且一个不小心,就堕落了。没堕落的,也无非是一个吵闹又耗钱的存在罢了。
一时想不起什么理由来说服她,但是心里的坚持却没有或减。
喜欢就是喜欢,也许真的是不需要什么理由的吧。
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阿濯喜欢小孩子,跟我一样

阿濯好好考试,然后会有个可爱的宝宝在未来的

你要让你的宝宝为你骄傲,加油

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真实温暖的一家子啊

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恭喜作娘了。[63]

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