行李的考研经验总结(16)——我的作文模板与总结
光说方法不行,例子是最具有说服性的,下来就把总结的模板写下来。在基础不太好的情况下能得到13分的大作文,对于我来说已经足够了。
句子和结构的主要来源是汪海涛06年flash讲义和朱泰祺的06年冲刺讲义。
小作文:开头 Dear Sir/Madam, Dear Mr. ***, Dear+Given Name
结尾 Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
7-8句话,每句12-13个单词,15分钟,审题三分钟,写作十分钟,检查二分钟。
有三个要点,第一个(2句),第二个(4句),第三个(2句) 可随机排列,但要八句话。
第一段:表写作目的 I am writing this letter to you to express my gratitude for _____.感谢信;complain about______.投诉信;apply for the post of ____.求职信/申请; congratulate you on _____.祝贺信 ;express my heartfelt sympathy.安慰信;make some useful suggestions.建议信; ask you to ____.通知信/安排信;order /refund _____.订货信/退货信 ;recommend_____. 推荐信 ;invite_______.邀请信 ;express my regret.道歉信
第二段:常用句型 I would like to ______and I would also like _____.
There are _____.
I have to _____.
It's ______.
主+is+表.
连接词 First,Second,Finally,and in addition,however
第三段:要求采取行动: I would appreciate it if you could....
结束语:I am looking forward to seeing you/your reply./I am sorry for any inconveniences I have caused by.
Thank you for your attention.
大作文:
根据上图总结可知:大作文最常考的是图画作文,一般分为三段,第一段为图画描述段,第二三段可能为意义阐释段、建议措施段、举例论证段中的两种。
一、图画描述段
分为两种:图画描述或图画描述+意义阐释
1.图画描述分为一图与两图对比
a.两图对比时:
1.The set of thought-provoking drawings above vividly depict the destiny of A in different circumstances./interaction between A and B in different circumstances./two quit different situations.
2.As is shown in the first cartoon/picture,_________________.
3.On the contrary, the second picture/cartoon described _______________.
b.一图时:
1.What a vivid picture it is! This thought-provoking picture/cartoon above clearly depicts 名词或that从句。
2.细节描写What makes the cartoon surprising lies in the fact that ______________while____________.
3.There is no denying that _______________________.
二、意义阐释段
1.What is conveyed in the picture goes far beyond merely an issue of_____.Instead,the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriouly.It carries the message that______________.
2.Owing to __________,__________________.
3.If we let this situation go as it is, our society will suffer a great destruction. In other words,once ____________,we do not know what will happen in the future.
4.Actually,people are showing a real concern over the problem. Generally speaking,______________.
三、建议实施段
1.In my opinion, three effective measures must be immediately taken to solve the problem.
2.On the one hand,we should appeal to our governments to make concrete laws to control/protect_______.
3.On the other hand, we should enhance people's awarness that ________.
4.More importantly,we should not only ______but also______.
5.Only by this means can we ___________________.
6.Also I believe that __________to some extent contribute to building a harmonious society.
四、举例论证段
1.I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following example(s).
2.A case in point is _________.
3.Another example is closely related to us.________________.
4.On the whole, these examples effectively clarify the saying that ________________.
最后要说的话:我尽可能将模版中的固定内容增加,大作文考研要求180字,而我的模版每句话的固定成分加起来就120-130字,只用填写五六十字就可达到要求。这只能算一种抛砖引玉,每个人都应该有自己的模版。这样在考场上可以用最短的时间写出符合要求的文章。
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